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One Fell Down (Sherlock)

Title: One Fell Down
Author: Morgan Stuart
Fandom: Sherlock
Disclaimer: This universe does not belong to me; I'm just an appreciative visitor. I make no profit from this fan work.
Description: When the fall is all there is, Lestrade discovers, it matters.
Historian's Note: This takes place after the Sherlock episode "The Great Game."
Warnings (Highlight to Read): Non-explicit/implied torture and non-consensual sexual violence, possible character death, dark themes



He scrambled up from the murky depths in fits and starts. When he finally broke the surface, every sensory input seemed so very wrong that he held himself still, feigning unconsciousness, groping for memory and explanation.

Coffee. Someone had brought him coffee. Who? Normally Detective Inspector Lestrade was the kind of man who insisted on obtaining his own beverages, thank you very much, but he'd needed it so badly – when had he last slept, really slept, since John Watson went missing? – that he hadn't thought twice about accepting the cup.

Yes, drugs explained why his tongue lay thick in his dry mouth, and his mind seemed every bit as slow as Sherlock always claimed.

Well done, you, he told himself with no little disgust.

He was nude, he could tell that well enough, and bound by some kind of restraints to a metal surface. He spared a second for the sheer humiliation of being stripped and laid out bare by unknown hands against his will, and then swallowed down the thought permanently. Lestrade was a practical man, and he knew there were far worse fates than being a bit embarrassed.

Ever so slowly, he opened his eyes.

Here, it seemed, was one of those worse fates. Christ.

The room was bare and antiseptic and coldly clinical. Several trays stood beside the stainless steel table on which he was bound, directly in his line of sight. Instruments lay sorted in neat order: scalpels, forceps, saws… Oh yes, the detective inspector knew the trappings of an autopsy when he saw them.

And now he had no doubt whatsoever who had arranged this particular scene. Only one mastermind had this kind of flair for the melodramatic.

Adrenaline bathed his nerves, begging him to flee or fight, but only succeeding in causing him to thrash uselessly against his many bindings in a blind animal panic. The storm passed mere moments later and left him gasping, grateful at least that the lingering clouds from the drugs seemed to be clearing, as well.

Mounted on the wall opposite of Lestrade was a camera.

He forced himself to swallow.

His options did seem very limited indeed. It occurred to him that this could very well be the room in which he breathed his last.

Come on, you sick and cowardly little bastard, he thought with sudden fury. You brought me to this party. Don't keep me waiting.

He closed his eyes and did his best to give his watchers as little entertainment as possible.

Lestrade had never met Jim from IT, but he'd seen the man's personnel file photo after his identity had been revealed. During his tireless efforts at tracking down the consulting criminal, Sherlock had found a few other pictures to show him, as well.

When Moriarty finally appeared, Lestrade knew him by sight.

Lestrade also knew the man with him, although he scarcely could believe it. John Watson was of a slighter build than Sherlock or Lestrade himself, but the doctor had never seemed small until now, as he stumbled like a sleepwalker, gaunt and blank-eyed and barely covered by a loose-fitting dressing gown.

He wore a chain choke-collar, the kind Lestrade thought of as intolerably abusive for dogs; colourful bruises and raw sores on his neck gave undeniable proof that it had been used vigorously. Moriarty, a stark contrast in his impeccably neat designer suit and tie, held the attached leash and dragged the man forward.

"I see we're awake, Detective Inspector! And that means it's show time." Moriarty's cheery voice and manic grin made Lestrade's flesh crawl. "I believe you know my pet, here."

He positioned John at the foot of the table as a shopkeeper might pose a mannequin. His glances at the wall above Lestrade's head suggested a second camera there.

Ignoring Moriarty, Lestrade said, "John. Doctor Watson." He cleared his throat and mentally cursed his hoarseness. "John, please."

John barely blinked as Lestrade studied him. Each patch of bare skin showed signs of brutal treatment: cuts and welts, bruises and burns, and angry, precise patches where electrodes had been secured. His pupils were enormous, nearly swallowing his irises whole. A plastic shunt protruded from the medical tape that held it in place over and into a vein on his right forearm.

The better to pump him full of whatever the hell Moriarty wants, Lestrade thought grimly.

"Yes," Moriarty said, more softly this time, obviously enjoying Lestrade's dawning comprehension, "his training is proceeding very nicely. Quite the good little soldier, our boy Johnny. Put up an admirable fight, as you'd expect, but he's my dog now."

John at last had noticed the naked victim before him. He seemed to be struggling to focus his eyes and his wits, wavering on his feet.

Lestrade knew the instant John realized what was happening. The doctor jerked, as if comprehension and horror had struck him together like a physical blow. Almost in slow motion, John's lips formed words without sound. The detective inspector could read them without difficulty: "Lestrade. God. No."

"I'm planning a surprise to be waiting for Sherlock, when I finally allow him to charge headlong into my trap," Moriarty was saying. "But you don't wait to take your test drive on the day of the big race, do you? I'm sure you understand. Nothing personal, of course. I just needed a trial subject for Johnny, someone expendable."

"He's. Not," John's voice sounded strangled. His neck muscles corded with effort; his wide eyes shone with unshed tears. "Not. Expen…"

Lestrade hoped John could see the gratitude on his face.

"Really, Johnny. Do shut up." Moriarty rolled his eyes with theatrical exaggeration. Lestrade kept his gaze locked on John's, holding it like a lifeline.

"As I was saying," Moriarty continued, "Johnny's going to demonstrate how one conducts an autopsy. Of course, the procedure's usually performed on the dead, but no worries; I'm sure you'll get there in the end." He patted his captive's cheek; Lestrade denied him a response. "I know Sherlock will find the footage most instructive."

To be cut through and opened up and pulled apart, all the while aware and agonized and, dear God, filmed…

Enough, Lestrade told himself, setting his jaw. Stop it.

"Before we get started, there's just one last detail to arrange. I want to be sure Sherlock appreciates how thoroughly Johnny's taken to his conditioning, how excited the good doctor is to be in my hands, as it were..."

Moriarty positioned himself behind John, waved at the camera, and then reached around the doctor, into his robe. The table on which Lestrade lay was waist-high, but he didn't need to see the perverse display in order to understand. John's eyes slid away to stare at the wall over Lestrade's head as Moriarty's hands worked.

The sunken face crumpled for several heartbeats, and then John's features resolved into a cold, hard mask, belied only by silent tears running down his cheeks.

Moriarty was whispering something into his ear, words with a singsong rhythm, too hushed for Lestrade to understand. Part of the conditioning, no doubt.

Sickened to the core, Lestrade closed his eyes. Helpless. He was so bloody helpless.

No, despair was just as pointless as panic. He took a deep breath.

With startling clarity, as random thoughts sometimes interrupt in the midst of crisis, Lestrade recalled The Lion in Winter. It had been Jenny's favourite film.

Jenny, he thought. How I've missed you. See you soon, love.

He'd liked the movie well enough, himself. It was a classic for a reason. A couple of lines had made a particular impression on him with each viewing, enough to remain with him all these years. Geoffrey, Duke of Brittany, was chiding his brother, the future Richard I, the one they called Lionheart, for wanting a good and meaningful death.

"Why, you chivalric fool – as if the way one fell down mattered," Geoffrey said.

"When the fall is all there is, it matters," Richard replied.

Lestrade thought he understood it now, perhaps in a way he never had.

He didn't want to die. But who did? He'd have to someday. He'd have to today, apparently.

He could choose how.

With resolve, he set aside the things he'd wanted that would never be. After all, he'd had so much. And the things that meant the most to him now – mentoring Sally, consulting Sherlock, stopping murderers – would continue to yield fruit in the world long after his body was cold. It was enough. More than.

He opened his eyes.

"… there, nice and snug," Moriarty was positively crooning. "You can wear it while you work." He didn't bother to do up John's dressing gown. "Now it's time to get started, don't you think?"

The doctor's wet eyes, framed by the dark smudges of sleep deprivation, had gone blank again.

"I'll leave you to it, shall I?" Moriarty spoke more loudly this time, including Lestrade. "Thanks, Detective Inspector, for, ah… taking one for the team, as they say."

His smile turned feral. "If it's any consolation, I'm sure you'll make a very pretty cadaver. I may have to drop in and admire you in person. Johnny no doubt will be dreaming of you for a very long time to come."

With a parting pat to Lestrade's leg, he said, "Like any good director, I'll be watching from behind the camera."

He paused at the door. "John" – this was an altogether different voice, one with the authority of a commanding officer – "you know what to do. Do it." Then he was gone.

Lestrade's brief glimpse through the closing door revealed at least two armed guards.

As he expected. Nothing for it. He pulled a sense of purpose around himself like a shock blanket.

"John," he said. Pausing, clearing his throat, he tried again, "John. I know you can hear me. Just listen, yeah?"

With the shuffling steps of a pensioner in pain, John moved toward the medical tools.

"Sherlock, his brother, Sally: they're all looking for you," Lestrade said. "They'll find you. You've got to hang on and buy them time. Don't give up."

Reaching out, John steadied himself against the nearest tray. His hand shook. Every part of him shook.

"'Til then, do what you need to do. It's Moriarty's doing, not yours. Not your fault." Lestrade waited, hoping the words were finding their target somewhere inside this starved and tortured shell of a colleague and friend.

John began breathing hard, sucking air through his teeth. "Too many guards," he hissed. "Too many locks. Tried. Can't."

"Easy. It's all right." Lestrade said, gentling his tone. "Just breathe."

After a beat, he added, "I know I'm a dead man, John. Better by your hand than his. Don't give him cause to hurt you any more."

The doctor bent over the tray, peering at the scalpels. "I'll kill us both," he whispered, labouring for each word. "You and me. Together."

"No!" Lestrade strained his neck, trying to catch John's attention. "John, you can't."

Choosing the only argument he thought might hold weight with the floundering man, Lestrade said, "Losing you would destroy Sherlock. He won't rest until he rescues you and makes Moriarty pay. If he finds you're gone… think, John. Don't do that to him. Please."

A high-pitched keening sound came from John's throat, fragile and brief as a child's first whistle.

It wasn't lost on Lestrade, what he was asking John to endure.

Shuddering, John managed, in halting syllables, "Needs. You. Too."

Lestrade shook his head. "As long as he has you, he'll do. Losing both of us, though… Please, John. Don't do it to him. Don't let Moriarty win."

John flinched, and then began to rock slightly, like a traumatized toddler. His words came almost too faintly to hear. "Sorry. Sorrysorrysorry…"

"John. John. Look at me," Lestrade implored.

At long last, he did.

"I'm asking," Lestrade said. "Don't leave me for him. Just do it already, yeah? Get it over with. Please. Before he comes back."

Something flickered in those dull, haunted eyes.

"Do it," he continued, "and live to see the bastard dead. For Sherlock. For me. For you."

The doctor's fingers closed around the scalpel and lifted it. Although John moved jerkily, marionette-like, Lestrade could see that his left hand no longer trembled.

"Brave man," John panted. "Good. Decent." He was visibly struggling now. "I'll never forget. Never."

The scalpel moved to Lestrade's neck, hovering over his carotid artery, too high for the traditional Y-incision. Mercy killing, not extended torture.

"John, don't," he protested, praying that John could sense only his determination and not his fear. "He'll punish you."

"He'll do that" – John swallowed – "anyway." His nostrils flared as he fought for his own will. "I. Get. This."

And there he was, the Doctor John Watson whom Lestrade knew, bending so close their foreheads almost touched.

"Forgive me." John's breath stank of drugs and blood and other things Lestrade didn't want to contemplate.

Holding his voice steady, Lestrade said, "There's no need."

This wasn't surrender; it was the opposite. He wasn't on his feet, as he'd always wanted, but he was fighting all the same. For the good and against the bad. This he could do.

He felt the blade press against his flesh.

"Not your fault," he repeated, a ghost of a sound.

There came a crash, like a door thrown open wide.

Lestrade closed his eyes.


The End

Vital Stats: Originally written in June 2011.

Originally written for the Rupert Graves birthday meme at dilestrade. Inspired by Rupert Graves's portrayal of Septimus Warren Smith in Mrs. Dalloway, and specifically these lines: "You want my life? I'll give it to you."

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morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 05:41 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much. And, um, sorry. *winces* They're both so brave when they're a little (or a lot) broken.
rabidsamfan
Jun. 30th, 2011 05:43 pm (UTC)
Gah! Brilliant, but GAH!
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 05:42 pm (UTC)
Aw, thank you! And I'm sorry. I had the GAH! reaction myself when the bunny bit me. Eeek!

Thanks so much for reading.
shefa
Jun. 30th, 2011 06:00 pm (UTC)
*sobs and sobs

Beautifully and painfully done.

Poor, poor Lestrade and John. My god.
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 05:54 pm (UTC)
*hugs you and hands you tissues* I'm sorry! But I'm also glad you found it to be moving. These two are, I'd expect, vastly underestimated by Moriarty (as anything other than tools), and I felt compelled to point out that, even broken, they're incredibly strong in ways he'd never be. But mostly, the bunny bit me (the visual of John standing at the foot of the gurney, fighting through a drugged haze to string together the words to say Lestrade wasn't expendable), and this is the only way I could exorcise it. ;)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 05:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm sorry for any heartache this caused! But, selfishly, I'm gratified to know you found it moving.

It makes my day that you think the characterizations worked. It struck me that Moriarty vastly underestimates these men, seeing John as a tool and Lestrade (if he thinks of him at all) as expendable. And though both can be hurt and scared and broken, each is also incredibly strong in his own way, with a kind of strength that would defy Moriarty in the end. Even as vulnerable and helpless as they are, they created and made choices for themselves.

At any rate, thank you so much for your kind feedback. It means a lot to me!

spacemutineer
Jun. 30th, 2011 06:08 pm (UTC)
Good heavens. Poor... well, everybody. Poor everybody. "GAH" appears to be your most common comment here, and it is well deserved! Wow. Heavy. So good and so painful.
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 06:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! And sorry for the GAH! (<-I had the same reaction when the idea came to me, to be honest.) I do love the idea, though, that even at their weakest and most helpless, these men would find a way to defy Moriarty somehow.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting! Thank you.
methylviolet10b
Jun. 30th, 2011 06:33 pm (UTC)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIGH!!!

I'd have said GAH, or even GUH, but they simply weren't sufficient. Okay, in my head, the door crashing open is Sherlock or Sally or somebody to the rescue. Yep. That's it. Sure.

...I'll just be over here in the corner, whimpering...

morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 06:13 pm (UTC)
*finds you in the corner and gives you a hug*

Sorry about that. Truly. (But, selfishly, I'm also glad to know it had an emotional impact. *winces*) I couldn't shake the idea that Moriarty had underestimated these two terribly, and that even at their most helpless and vulnerable, they'd find a way to create choices for themselves and "show their quality," as Samwise Gamgee would say.

I had to leave the proverbial door open. I just had to. Whether it's rescue, or it's Moriarty, or it's the gates of the afterlife swinging open for Lestrade, or whatever... I just had to do it.

(I hope it's Sherlock and Sally and Mycroft's minions, each with a separate piece of Moriarty. *winks*)
to_question
Jun. 30th, 2011 06:43 pm (UTC)
Once I'm done crying in the corner of my room, I'll leave a better comment. For now, you'll have to do with *Sob* "It was brilliant." *Sob*
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 06:15 pm (UTC)
*hugs you tightly* Oh, thank you so much! And, um, I'm sorry! *hugs you some more* I really appreciate your reading and commenting. Apologies for the heartache!

noirrosaleen
Jun. 30th, 2011 06:50 pm (UTC)
CURSE YOU SHAN YU!

The door crashing open is rescue. I refuse it to be anything else. *nods firmly*
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 07:39 pm (UTC)
Awww! I am sorry. But I'm glad you liked the "choose your own ending" option. :) I heartily approve of the idea of rescue, by the way.

As always, thanks so much for reading and commenting!
goldvermilion87
Jun. 30th, 2011 06:51 pm (UTC)
Oh my goodness!

I... hope that was help coming? :-(
goldvermilion87
Jun. 30th, 2011 06:53 pm (UTC)
(also for the record, it was good... I don't know if I expressed it... but it was good horrible. you know?)
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scotlandyarder
Jun. 30th, 2011 07:43 pm (UTC)
Wow... That was quite amazing. In a, you know, horrible and appalling way, or maybe horrible in an amazing way? But put me firmly in the camp that flatly refuses to believe anything but that the crash was help arriving in the nick of time! In my world, the alternative isn't even an option. Really, really (horrible!) awesome job.
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 07:47 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much! I wanted to "leave the door open," as it were, so you could assume rescue if you wanted. I'm glad that helped. As bleak as it is, I do love the idea that even at their weakest and most helpless, these men would find a way to defy Moriarty somehow and make meaningful (and courageous) choices.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting. Thanks so much!

batgurl10
Jun. 30th, 2011 07:56 pm (UTC)
HOLY FREAKING MOSES! plz dont leave us there????????????????????????????????????????????????
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 07:51 pm (UTC)
Aw, I'm so sorry! I wanted to leave the ending open so the reader could decide what happened, whether that crashing sound was rescue, Moriarty, Lestrade's own death, or something else altogether. So, what you think happened? Yeah, that's it. :)

Apologies for, erm, cliffhanging. And thank you for reading!
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cookiefleck
Jun. 30th, 2011 08:01 pm (UTC)
OMG, this is brilliant! In every way. The way you build suspense, bit by bit, first Lestrade discovering his situation, then John entering, then the ending sequence, and then the final line. Brilliant! You packed so much into relatively few words. Bravo!

"his mind seemed every bit as slow as Sherlock always claimed" - awwwwwwww.

Tiny typo in this sentence, I think... should be: the way one fell

The way you wrote John's entrance slayed me...

morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 07:54 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, my friend! I'm so delighted that you enjoyed it. I was really taken with the idea of these two, helpless and vulnerable, still carving out a space to make choices and "show their quality," as Samwise Gamgee would say. :)

Thanks a million for catching my error. I appreciate it so much!

I'm especially glad the description of John worked for you. Poor, tortured, brave John...
kiwi_jam
Jun. 30th, 2011 08:40 pm (UTC)
The End?
THE END?
gvhrdewwaagfdgffh!

The only reason I'm not crying is that the door opening has got to be a last second rescue.
It just has to be.

~wibble~
morganstuart
Jul. 1st, 2011 07:57 pm (UTC)
I'm sorry! *huge hugs* I did want to reader to be able to choose how it ended, so if it's rescue you want, then consider it done. ;) It is possible, after all, that Moriarty's minions might have left more of a trail with Lestrade's abduction than with John's, and Sherlock and Company could have followed it back to this lair...

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
supermusicmad
Jun. 30th, 2011 09:10 pm (UTC)
OK, I've had five minutes to calm down, and now hopefully I can find a way of putting my emotions into actual words, rather than just keyboard smashing.

Poor broken John! It was terrible to see him so under Moriarty's power, I don't even want to think about the torture he underwent to make him that way. D: I especially loved your description of how he looked, for the first time, *small* to Lestrade, and that emptiness in his eyes was terrifying.

And Lestrade! When he's first left alone with John, and tells him there's a rescue coming and he mustn't give up, and it sounds almost like Lestrade's going to beg for his life, and then he turns it around with that sudden and wonderful "Do what you need to do..." Well. My stomach dropped. :O

And even when John had a knife to his throat, ready to kill him, Lestrade's asking him to do it more slowly, more painfully, just to save John the punishment later. It's heartbreaking to see Lestrade willing to go through so much in order to ensure there is a John Watson left to rescue. "This wasn't surrender; it was the opposite": what a perfect paragraph, because this truly is what he's doing. He's fighting Moriarty not by resisting his death, but by making sure he dies for a purpose and doing everything he can to help John. And it's wonderful.

Also, that ending? THAT IS NOT AN ENDING. IT IS A GUARENTEED WAY TO MAKE THIS FIC HAUNT ME, CUNNINGLY DISGUISED AS AN ENDING. What a mind-numbing cliffhanger to a chilling fic. Amazing. :)
sabrinaphynn
Jun. 30th, 2011 10:26 pm (UTC)
Erm...
yeah, what ^^above poster^^ said, far more eloquently than I could.
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kiharukitty
Jun. 30th, 2011 10:19 pm (UTC)
Brilliant. Just so intense and gripping, and my heart is breaking for the both of them Sherlock too, for when he finds out). Yet at the same time you see Moriarty's mistake in underestimating these men, these men who bowed cannot truly be broken. Amazing fic.
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 12:57 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much! I wholly agree about including Sherlock in this. When he finds out... ouch.

Yet at the same time you see Moriarty's mistake in underestimating these men, these men who bowed cannot truly be broken.

You've just said in one beautiful sentence what it took me an entire story to try to express! So wonderfully put, your insight. It thrills my heart if this came across. These are amazing men, possessed of a kind of unsung courage Moriarty will never appreciate.

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind and encouraging feedback. It means a lot to me.
tunes84
Jun. 30th, 2011 11:27 pm (UTC)
I don't even know what to say. Think I might fall over into a heap of broken fangirl-pieces. This is just...I don't even know what to say. UGH.

So much haaaate *bawls*

You and your way with words. Stop being so awesome :P
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 12:59 am (UTC)
*hugs you tightly*

Thank you so much! And, um, I'm sorry. They were just being so *brave*, you know?

Please don't cry! I owe you one for reading and commenting. I do appreciate it a great deal.

PS. I owe you a message! ASAP!
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impishtubist
Jun. 30th, 2011 11:48 pm (UTC)
You have an incredible way with words. This is beautiful and heart-wrenching at the same time, and I love your Lestrade. The line He wasn't on his feet, as he'd always wanted, but he was fighting all the same was especially lovely.

Gonna go cry in a corner, now...
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:03 am (UTC)
I'm torn between begging you not to cry and telling you that, considering how many times you've made me get weepy, turnabout is fair play. *winks and grins* No, seriously, thank you so much for your kind words. They mean a lot. I'm so glad you found it to be moving.

I'm especially pleased the sentence about Lestrade fighting worked for you. It's one of my favourites.

I really appreciate your feedback, as always!
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fengirl88
Jul. 1st, 2011 01:39 am (UTC)
this one was very hard to read - brilliant and horrifying. that idea of being left with only the choice of how to die, but still seeing it as a choice, is so powerful and haunting.
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:07 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm really glad that the idea of choice came through, because that was really at the heart of what I wanted to express: I couldn't shake the idea that Moriarty had underestimated these two terribly, and that even at their most helpless and vulnerable, they'd find a way to deny him his fun, create choices for themselves, and "show their quality," as Samwise Gamgee would say. The kind of strength each of them possess is simply beyond Moriarty.

I really appreciate your kind feedback. Thanks again!
bk7brokemybrain
Jul. 1st, 2011 01:40 am (UTC)
This was really good. You ought to warn for torture, though. Only two things squick me: executions and torture, and I might have passed on this if I knew. Thanks.
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:15 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading. I really regret squicking you. I post full warnings on all the Sherlock LJ communities where I post links to this, using their header layouts, and on the other platforms I use - FF.net, AO3, Skyehawke - but I forget that some readers come straight to a story directly through my LJ. Personally, I have a strong distaste for warnings and other story tags (much as I do for extended film trailers that give away the main ingredients of a movie), but I realize this LJ isn't for me, it's for those who might want to read my work, and I should be responsive to others' sensibilities. I'll have to think about the best way to do that. Maybe a warning line that requires highlighting to read, so only those who want it will access it? At any event, that's my issue, not yours, and I'm grateful for your bringing it to my attention. (For your immediate information, I think the only other Sherlock story of mine to which the "torture/execution" label probably applies is "A Study in Grey.") Again, my sincere apologies. I don't want to make you uncomfortable in any way, my friend!
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bluerosefairy
Jul. 1st, 2011 03:09 am (UTC)
God, yeah, that's how Lestrade would go out. He would never let John sacrifice himself too, and he would want it to be John who kills him instead of Moriarty. Chilling and heartbreaking.
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:17 am (UTC)
I'm so thrilled that Lestrade's characterization rings true for you. What you've described is exactly what I was aiming for. Thank you so very much for reading and commenting. You've made my day!
rusty_armour
Jul. 1st, 2011 04:00 am (UTC)
This was difficult to read but so worth it in the end. This is such a wonderful testament to Lestrade's character. Although Moriarty saw him as the expendable loser, Lestrade came out as the winner because he was brave and noble till the very end. And while it's in his job description to put other people before himself, it's a lot harder to do that when you're in such a frightening position. This is heartbreaking but beautiful.
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:19 am (UTC)
You can't imagine how much I appreciate this. I really was trying to offer a tribute to Lestrade's character, and I'm so thrilled this came through. Apologies for the heartbreak, but I am glad you found this to be moving. Thank you so much for reading the story, and for offering such encouraging feedback!
brighteyed_jill
Jul. 1st, 2011 04:23 am (UTC)
Oh my stars. You're so good at showing Lestrade's particular brand of quiet heroism. And you know I appreciate a good kidnap-and-torture scenario. This was lovely and heart-rending, and a very enjoyable read, as is everything of yours, m'dear.
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:20 am (UTC)
Oh, thanks a million. That means a lot. I appreciate it so much!
derry667
Jul. 1st, 2011 09:21 am (UTC)
Adding my voice to the chorus of "God! That was awesome!"

There is so much to appreciate about this fic, but I think that what I love the most is the way that you portray both Lestrade and John as incredibly vulnerable here, and yet they are still strong in the ways that count. Lestrade determined to go out taking what victory he can (and heartwarmingly he decides that is John's survival both for John's own sake and Sherlock's too). And John fighting hard against what must have been overwhelming torture and "conditioning" to finally rally and be "the Doctor John Watson whom Lestrade knew".

Okay, I do also admit that I'm ever so grateful that you put in "a crash, like a door thrown open wide" at the end because that provides just enough ambiguity that I come away from this with my heart in my mouth and rather than in a million splintered shards on the floor. Yep, that's Sherlock and the rest of the cavalry coming. No question.

But still means that you've ended on a cliffhanger as brutal as the end of the first series (I think Gatiss and Moffat would be proud of you).

Edited at 2011-07-01 09:23 am (UTC)
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:29 am (UTC)
Wow, you can't imagine how much I appreciate your amazing feedback. Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot that you found it to be moving and true to the characters.

both Lestrade and John as incredibly vulnerable here, and yet they are still strong in the ways that count.

I am so happy that this came through. It's exactly what I was hoping to express: Lestrade's courage in making his death meaningful by "saving" John as best he could, and John's incredible struggle to retain his individual will and moral centre despite Moriarty's use and abuse. Both of them possess a kind of courage Moriarty can't begin to understand, and even at their weakest and most vulnerable, they can carve out choices and deny him the complete victory/control he wants.

I had to leave the proverbial door open. I just had to. Whether it's rescue, or it's Moriarty, or it's the gates of the afterlife swinging open for Lestrade, or something else altogether... I just had to do it. I guess it's my version of offering a "choose your own ending" option. Ha!

I think Gatiss and Moffat would be proud of you

LOL! Considering the fact I yelled at the screen at the end of "The Great Game," I'll take this as both an insult and compliment. *winks and laughs*

I can't thank you enough for your encouraging comments. They really thrilled my heart. Thank you.
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lady_ganesh
Jul. 1st, 2011 09:47 pm (UTC)
Goddamn. I'm impressed. Tough and dark.
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 01:21 am (UTC)
Well, you've just completely and utterly made my day. Thank you so much! I appreciate it.
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archea2
Jul. 2nd, 2011 10:40 am (UTC)
Ah, you are the Queen of Lestrangst. Undoubtedly. And I really admire how you manage to work in such a load of perverse and sordid Moriartesque details while remaining so elegant in style.

I must say I love your ambiguous endings (just like the "grey dawn" of a previous fic). The "crash" rather makes me hopeful - somehow, I don't see Jim as the crashing type, even if he was afraid that one of his toys might escape him into death. But I'll stay with the ambiguity. Yummy.

Oh, and you've made me eager to see "A Lion in Winter", now. The lines you quoted are beautiful and so in tune with your Lestrade. (Any chance we'll see more of the Sophie 'verse btw? I love your fervently friendly threesome!)
morganstuart
Jul. 2nd, 2011 12:38 pm (UTC)
Aw, thank you so much! That makes my day. :) I'm so glad the style worked, even with the nastiness described.

What makes me happiest is that the ending worked for you. I'm so pleased about that. I figured that what I wanted to say about Lestrade and John both - their determination and morality and courage - had been said, and whether that's rescue or Moriarty or even just the sound in Lestrade's head as the worst happens, well, it doesn't really affect the point of the piece. Lestrade and John had already shown "their quality," as Samwise Gamgee would say. (For what it's worth, I tend to agree with you that Moriarty wouldn't be the crashing type.)

I can't recommend The Lion in Winter (the original from 1968, with Peter O'Toole, Katharine Hepburn, Anthony Hopkins, John Castle, Timothy Dalton, and Nigel Terry) highly enough. It's awe-inspiringly brilliant. I'm so glad the quote seemed fitting for Lestrade.

Oh, and thank you for asking after Sofie! The next installment (currently titled "Sentry Duty") is almost finished. It will be part of the "Summer of Sherlock" at sherlockmas, so it will be posted sometime in August. I'll also post it here and elsewhere as soon as it goes up there. I appreciate your asking!

As always, I'm grateful for your lovely feedback. Thank you.
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